Responding to feedback

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I created a prototype of my book in the right (ish) size

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I was given some really helpful feedback from my tutor Phil, who advised I change the layout of the typography a bit. I am moving the titles over to the right, adjusting the latin title, and simplifying the punctuation. Also the ‘Know your litterbugs’ header has been changed to a footer on the bottom right hand side of the page.

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I am also re-writing some of the copy to give it even more personality. I couldn’t decide whether there should be a coloured background on the left hand page like so:

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I like it but depending on the quality of my paper it may not show up very well.

I have got quotes from ABC imaging of approx £9 plus VAT which seems high for an A6 booklet. I may well bring in my own paper to try and bring down costs. I am still trying to source recycled paper.

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